+This is my first ever short story, that has 3 chapters... This is the first chapter...hope you'll enjoy readin' ^^+
CHAPTER 1: OUT OF LUCK
My name’s Luck and I lost everything, everything that matters to me. I don’t have any friends and my family; I don’t know where they are. I have a horrible past and I don’t want to talk about it. I have a wonderful childhood but since the day my parents died, everyone lefts me out, nobody cares to what I feel even though I am crying in front of them. My aunt has a good heart. Then she decided that I must move in to her house. But as the time goes by, I feel like I am a hindrance to her, that’s why I need to move out of her house. She didn’t make me to stay out, I’ve just made my own decision and I moved out without telling her so I don’t know if she cares or what. Maybe it’s LU CK that I’ve existed in this cruel world, maybe that’s why LUCK is my name. I am 17 years old and I don’t believe in LOVE. LOVE is an endless pain. It slowly kills your heart and love lefts you in doom. For me, LOVE is a doom that effects every second, and every second it lessens your life span. I learned how to love and I found out that it hurts so much. I was like I was surrounded in darkness and left in a hailstorm. I was falling in the dark then icicle spears give me chills in my weak body. Why these people do thinks love is a great feeling. They say love is sweet, like that would happen it’s not sweet as a dark chocolate which really tastes good…yeah. At least dark chocolates make my soul happy but besides that no one can make me happy. I made my statement and I’ll never break that. I was watching the news when I heard a house was burning. At first I wasn’t listening to what the news says but when I heard my ex-girlfriend’s name “Stellar Pupil” was one of the victims that are in the burning house, my heart starts to beat so fast that I can’t control it. My nerves were chilling cold and I can’t move well. When my eyes start to drop off tears, I suddenly ran into the door and ran into the burning house. I know I can’t reach it with my two bare feet but I’ll do this for her. I know it has no sense that I am still sacrificing for her because we are no longer boyfriends. But while I was running my memories with Stellar was playing in my mind. +++ ( a year ago ) Stellar: “Luck! How much do you love me?” Luck: “See that moon? You know its weight? I love you greater than the moons weight!” Stellar: “Oh Luck! You’re such a funny person. Haha what is the weight of the moon anyway? Do you know what?” Luck: “Uhhmmmm you see ….it’s like uhhh you know….” Stellar: “Haha you don’t know do you?” Luck: “Hey I know that! You just don’t believe in me do you?” Stellar: “Okay you’re the smart one here so what is it?” Luck: “The weight of the moon, eh?” Stellar: “Yup! That’s what I wanted!” Luck: “I know, 5 pounds!” Stellar: “Haha like I’m gonna believe--- say so 5 pounds is just like this (Stellar shows her bag) so that means your love for me is just like this weightL?” Luck: “Haha I thought you don’t believe in me- you know Stellar I love you more than the weight of Jupiter, Mars, Earth, Mercury, Sun, Moon, Neptune, Uranus, Saturn and Venus!” Stellar: “Errm, you forgot Pluto?” Luck: “Pluto is not a planet --- ookay let’s just add them to the weights!” Stellar: “Haha I love you Luck!” +++ The day after that, Stellar betrayed me. I was walking in the streets and looking for a present so that I can give it to her in our monthsary when I saw her dating with another man. At first, I have no feelings that she’s betraying me. I walked on to her and then I greet her happily. +++ Luck: “Hey Stellar! I thought you’re going to have shopping with your mother?” ???: “Do you know this guy?” (Stellar was acting like being confused or something that she doesn’t want to say the truth) Stellar: ” Uh..I…I..I don’t know him? Who are you?” Luck: “What the..? Hey! how come that you don’t know me?!” ???: “Hey don’t threat my GIRLFRIEND!” Luck: “YOU’RE GIRLFRIEND!? But I was her….” Stellar: “Hey! Back off you’re disturbing us. Are you just crazy or what!? Let’s go Herron.” Herron: “Why do strangers always comes closer to you and pretends that they know you?” Stellar: “Hmph! Maybe I was just glamorous. “ Stellar and Herron: “hahaha…” +++ ( back in the present ) That day, I was like…, you know I would like to die. It’s like…It hurts so much… My love has been wasted… My true love thrashed me! Since when she was dating with other guys? Then my eyes start to produce tears that are made to fall in my eyes to the cold ground. What is this feeling that I’m feeling? That experience was such a cruel experience. My heart feels heavy and it’s like my effort for her is wasted. My foot hurts but this may be the last sacrifice that I must do for my beloved Stellar. I came running and running then I saw a burning house, “this must be it!”. There were so many people in the scenario. Just imagine that there was a burning house and maybe hundreds and hundreds of people are in there. The firemen were doing their own respective jobs but I can’t find Stellar. So I barged in the house then I found Stellar’s body starts to burn. Then I had to take her out of the house, then: Luck: “STELLAR!” Stellar: “Luck! I knew you’d come!” Luck: “Who did this?!” Stellar: “Herron! That devil! He killed my mother then traps me inside my room, then I don’t have an idea that he will, he will burn our house!” Luck: “Stellar let me take you to the hospital!” Stellar: “Why do you have to do that?” Luck: “Because I love you!” Stellar: “Luck! How could you do such a thing? I’ve betrayed you?” Luck: “I may be stupid but I’ll do this to you!” Stellar has already a third degree burn and almost you can’t see her face. But even though she betrayed me, I was still doing my JOB not as a BOYFRIEND but at least A SAVIOR to her life. I don’t know if I am stupid or what but I am willing to help Stellar because we had something on each other, lately though. I am successful that I brought her to the Hospital, but she didn’t last long. Stellar died, and even though she’s not my girlfriend anymore, I cried because she means a lot to me, and by that you can prove that I still haven’t moved on to our relationship. Stellar was my first love and she changed my whole life. She was the one that exposes me to the whole world. She’s the only human person that can make me happy but now that she’s gone, only dark chocolates can make me happy now but not like being happy with Stellar. After that day, cottons start to fall. I was sad that day, for the first time, Stellar missed the winter season. I was sitting in the bench and staring at the lovers that walked beside me. How I wish that I’d show Herron that I love Stellar. I wish that I fight my love for Stellar so that this event right now won’t happen and maybe I’ll get mad at Stellar but I am a forgiving person, and maybe we are happy in this moment with snow. How I wish that I could turn back time, because I have the guilt that’s inside. Now I can’t live without the trust from those I love. And know I must forget the past but I can’t. I can’t forget my love and pride to Stellar and because of that it’s killing me inside. My past was the worst timeline of my life, even this present time and now all returns into nothing. I just keep tumbling down, tumbling down, tumbling down…. In my heart I know that I could never love again because I have my own definition of love. It’s like I let Stellar down, and I’ve been fool to myself. I can’t even remember when was the last time I was happy. Maybe I’ll stay cold, silent, like this snow. I am Luck, and I am EMO. I don’t care what thinks about me but…(slowly fading out…) Luck: “No one would miss---“ +++ ???: “???1! Get ready for school!” ???1: “Wait a second!” ???: “The school bus waited for you too long enough! That’s why the bus left you out.” ???1: “Oh not again! GOTTA HURRY!” ???: “Hey Millie! You forgot your lunch!” Millie: “Oops! Sorry Mom!” Mom: “That’s okay! Take care in school!” Millie: “Hi I’m Millie 17 years old, I am so happy because God wake me up. He gave me another chance to prove myself to him so I now I am ready for his challenge! I want my life to be full of laughter and of course I like to have, you know, Intimate relationships! By the way, I love anime and I am sooo talkative, they have found out that I am so annoying because I am soo talkative but who cares? That’s the way I am! No one can change me! Hehe so now I am late in my school and I am ------------------(*bumps on a post!) Millie: “Awch! Ooohh…It hurts so much! Haha… one more thing, I’m clumsy …” +++ [Millie’s story will be posted later the chapter two: rise cheerful sun!]
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It's a good thing that you are writing short stories now. I am done with it. No, not done, but, in a vacation to short stories. I was able to write a couple of short stories in my blog but I don't want to do it now... just don't want to do. Rise, fiction writer! I am looking forward to chapter two though I am staying in that chamber (boarding house) until Friday, I think? Posts more and I'll be reading those as soon as I am back. :)